Carved a perfect score. Real feelings, real feelings, real insights, real indeed everything. Examiners who have been touched by the details of life, real emotions are touched, moved by scoring themselves moved, the result is a foregone conclusion, so the composition Fuzao the mark, the text title of far-fetched, development level and other ills are hard, all mention. 〗 〖College Admission Essay Questions Read the following text, writing on request. Memorial is a certain way Duirenduishi things that miss. It may have been the nation honors the memory of, memorial of past pain, it can be for families and individuals on the past memory of friends and relatives said. Memorial is different from the miss, it's not just surging inner feelings, he was a combination of thought and action. There are all kinds of life memorial, to commemorate the festival, glorifying is to commemorate, to plant a tree or write an article ... ... the form of memorial is there may be different, but equally true meaning. The real memorial is a spiritual response, the echo of history: it keep the faith, the courage to pass; its collection of moving, sharing happiness; its examination of the past, and to enlighten the future. Please - -2005 Guangdong college entrance essay questions [out of writing] Rich gentle rocking of the catkins forever like your flowing hair; that the stars shining bright eyes like you; day side like your gentle touch Hongxia lip; that the rain started falling on her mother like daughter, your endless thoughts. Mom, you left me was chastened. To commemorate you, I became more diligent, the house swept clean; the item put it in order; the furniture polished shiny. Everything for the home like you used to do the same, just like you never left; before misplacing things you love nagging me, saying how the girls have such bad habits, get rid of it. Every time I always ask you Duqi Zui Ba, proudly said had mom in What am I afraid. How you are alive there is no way get rid of this bad habit, love to rely on you, now you're gone, I actually put this get rid of bad habits, and if you see me become so well-behaved, the more pleased ah , is the mother? I really hope you can hear, in memory of you I get rid of. Mom, you are more concerned about my sister left. To commemorate you, I'm just like you did to her sister, so gentle, I always check my sister's work, attendance, etc., you rest assured, his sister is also very obedient, we have grown up, do not always love as before temper, quick to quarrel provoke your nerves, maybe you do not know, even the neighbors are around nine aunt praised the two sisters that we listen to sensible, said to be her second stop and Structure of Seven to us as an example the old with his younger brother fighting . Mother, can you hear me? To commemorate you, I become more like my sister. Mom, your hair is gone I'll stay long. To commemorate you, never leave a long-haired tomboy like me --- your daughter that decided to leave long hair, stay too long, the same year as you. Walking in the village,bailey UGG boots, they said it made him look like her kids OMG. Mom, you always blame before I had my hair cut so short, that did not taste a little girl, told me to hair long, I would not life and death, always said a little later to say. Now my hair is long, really long, and the mother is no longer in your side, you have to see it. Mom, I want to you can see. To commemorate you, I had my hair grow long. Mom, you're gone, the whole world has become so strange, I know what to do. I started an independent, learn how to do all sorts of job. I gotta arranged around the house as you are alive, my mother you know, in order to better mark you. Your voice and face, your manners already deep into her daughter's heart. I am willing to believe the existence of the soul, as you know her mother took them in a special way to commemorate you. A good mother to me like your fragrance last forever, his daughter only do these little things to commemorate you and may my mother rest in peace. [Marking teachers Comments] This a letter sent to heaven in volume more than 40 million college entrance essay to stand out, mainly due to two characteristics: plain language and sincere emotion. Happy families are all the same, unhappy family unhappy in its own. Through between the lines, we heard the sound of broken hearts, but also saw a loss in the experience of pain after the sudden growth relies on a strong hero image. Capture of three small outline of written materials, Ruqirusu, it Ganchangcunduan. Mother is gone, life of the tree to lean back, so it grows into a tree himself. Man you really love, this essay provides an example of this. (Wang Ying)
Second, the sentence is absolutely, absolutely sensational, absolute success. Markers in the great atmosphere of the beautiful words, to fully experience the mood and bring emotional impact, let them go, so this paragraph sets the natural structure such as dilution, do not repeat the word problem was so dignified. 〗 〖College entrance essay questions Read the following text, writing on request. A, B and two friends quarrel, B hit a punch, a writing in the sand, When they go out again, accidentally fell into a river, he saved up to B, a carved in stone, A: Please Custom conception, stylistic choice, since the proposed title. Content must be written within the scope of the topic. [Out of writing] is always the wave of the sheep whip Su Wu, Kam cap Diaoqiu he be thrown into the depths of the sky; get a bare pen, paper, short oblique lines, he engraved the most profound blessing of Han. Gaoguanhoulu side, one side is utter devotion: forget and remember standing in between, standing between Yi Yu and worries of labor, he chose to forget the wealth, chose to bear in mind the strong loyalty to the sum of human painted. Engine section of a banner, his arms harmony Hungary Su Han Wang, running in the vast desert; help while Camel, his absence Chang peacefulness, wandering in the cold sand wrapped in withered grass; he wants to use the backbone straight, set up lie Mountains, Central China's rainbow of communication. Lamented, when Han had failed to rebellion; righteousness, when Su Wu refused to betray the enemy off section; surprised, when Chanyu the face of this rather die than surrender, is not moved by Jagged rich man named; perseverance,UGG shoes, Su Wu raised his whip sheep, mountain snow lotus choice for persistent and watch it holy. The company of his coldest cold north wind, the North Central Plains consultants, the Hu Jia Resentment, he and the company of solitary mound, Chang Wang desert snow, the Cold cellar, he felt wool and grass will be a mouthful to swallow, feeling the blood was boiling an unfailing belief ... ... bearing in mind the motherland sake of the general. Falling snow and ice, he used a moving and turned its food wine, but sounded proud and clank future generations can not be moved farewell ... ... poor and lowly, incorruptible, wealth can still hope to forget. What a forever Su Wu; he wise, bearing in mind the faithful under the Han belief in the sky and the snow line and the song, put the bare section of the distillation section of Jing surprise through the ages, written for a sad song through the ages MCU . What a forever Su Wu; him with courage, forget the lure of wealth and status Chanyu in the desert sand in the drift away, to freeze the group of skinny sheep as a monumental history of the magnificent sway of an epic poem. History can not forget that in between the flashy and the stick, the North Sea, Su Wu, then exiled to the barren field of the original Jagged man, proud and with unyielding and clank made the most perfect interpretation, forget wealth, achievement integrity; Bearing in mind the country, creating great. I see, between the forgotten and the mind, between the enjoyment and perseverance, and that ice on top of the line of Su Wu in the hay, with determination and belief in making the best answer: wealth, but superficial, and forgotten, that is,UGG bailey button, It's best to end; loyalty before an eternal history, remember, is its spiritual home. Zai Zhuang, Su Wu was forever! Weizai, that vibration stirring forget! Qizai, bearing in mind that earth-shattering! Xiong Zai, forget and to remember that golden period of carol! Su Wu forever. [Comment on the teacher grading] This is a considerable accumulation of historical knowledge and cultural knowledge, talent and aura of the venue quite works. Profound grasp of the essence of the topic, with the dialectical method, historical sights on the sky, carefully selected to sway national hero Su Wu mind sees the material, enthusiastically eulogize him to , chosen bearing in mind the faithful, History of Su Wu, ah, Su Wu forever! He On the cheerful reverence, Baozhan passion, with a Su Wu is not only highly summarized the spirit of quality, but also highlight its lofty position in history. Contrast used throughout the article, and always on the historical scale of Su Wu to measure and promote the human righteousness, highlighting the hero of the ethical, vivid and profound interpretation of the subject. Due to extensive use of the duality, analogy, parallelism, references, and other figures of speech repeated, parallel combination of bulk sentence, Zhang Duanju varies, making the essay artistically smooth, sonorous rhythm, reading, people not only pride in the chest, and fragrant mouthful.
three novel can do no wrong, the unique set is magic. Scoring line in the scoring encounter on a daily basis how much to the embarrassment of the same material the same idea, ah, should the new material or unique idea flashed, eyes will light up〗 〖College Admission Essay Questions Read the following text, writing on request. A climbing Mount Everest climbers to participate in the activities of the height of 8,000 meters above sea level, he tired and stopped. Later, when he talk in this experience, we are sorry for him, why not insist on a little bit? To scale that height, and then look at his teeth clenched! In the materials, self-awareness climbers and In real life, sometimes self-knowledge consistent with the expectations of others, and sometimes inconsistent. Consistent, inconsistent, are worth considering. Please [Note] ① reference materials, test questions, candidates may also be available in the article do not. ② conception custom. ③ style choice. ④ subject self. ⑤ less than 800 words. ⑥ not plagiarism. ?????????????????????????????????????????????? - 2004 Chongqing college entrance essay questions [out of writing] I just want to die a fortune teller told me that I never ordered this, if survive this year, there are hundreds of days and nights. After careful consideration, I chose to take to the streets killing people. Over the years, I unworthy of human beings, people with blood and sweat to get into my food in exchange for the black hole of the gentle, ten blocks of my house, and each one possessor of in the street, Maybe later, One hour, two hours later, but no one shouting, people did not even look at me, I walked slowly, waiting for death to come. I blocked a gorgeously dressed young lady, I want him yelling, so those No shouting, also reported me a wink, said: I think this is what she expected it! I run farther, she still kept asking, But she was calm and I pass, I'm busy grabbed her sleeve, said: People now living to the streets Zeimeishuyan! Do not bother me, I would like to go shopping. Toss of her sleeves, like the young of many similar analysis, Flying away. Guaizai! Guaizai! My understanding is wrong, or do they have other expectations? Suddenly, I eye-catching, yes! The police have guns, like peanuts, as long as a fly over on the line. I came in front of a police officer, said: , then we are rat's son,cheap UGG boots, grandson, after you in the King Council where more than for me to talk, my name is 'to the Shang', call 5188. is how? I know how the expectations of their difference so much? I Yangtianchangtan: the dislocation, the irony of people non-reversed, and the abnormal as normal, and bad mood of numb state of mind and shows a profound, thought-provoking.
IV complex figurative culture, always been deeply moved by the excitement of the important elements from the people. Markers were as a result of such a feeling of intimacy and even favor, immersed in memories of unspeakable and aftertaste, stolen a busy marking field, finally got in the thick cultural atmosphere rendering digestion such as overstating thought, pretense emotion, diction general and a series of problems. 〗 〖College entrance essay questions read the text below, the required essay. Many cities are able to represent their cultural identity and has a heritage value of things, these things can be called the city's symbol. Forbidden City, Beijing courtyard is a symbol; bridge acrobatics, shouting hawkers in Beijing Hutong symbols; Liulichang the painting, the works of Lao She is the symbol of Beijing; Wangfujing Commercial Street, Zhongguancun Science Park in Beijing as a symbol ... ... development of the times, the future will continue to emerge out of the new Beijing symbol. Symbol reserved in the past to create new symbols, is Beijing's wish. In this regard, please In addition to poetry, open style, not less than 800 words. - 2006 Beijing college entrance essay questions [out of writing] the symbol ??????????????????????????????????? Beijing ?????????? - Sometimes secretly selling candied fruit in the street followed. It is not greedy candied fruit, but that sweet cries greedy. Often come to my door selling the old Beijing, the whole family to sell candied fruit. According to him, his grandfather had never been seen in the Qing Dynasty to sell candied fruit. Therefore, he absolutely authentic candied fruit, in the end is not difficult to trace. But he cries a sweet, I believe. I had never been seen small, but do not know what is authentic is not authentic, the only criterion for judging who is who cry out in an interesting way to buy the food. So I mixed with the old Beijing a Lianshu. That period of time, as long as he passes my door, behind him will be followed by a shouting and screaming with him a small break of 5-year-old baby. Old Beijing is like me, every day before the closing will give me a bunch of stands and the candied fruit as a reward. Once, he touched my head and said: So seriously looking at selling candied fruit, said: 15 years later, I grow into the size of Huoer 20 years old. Selling candied fruit that never see the old Beijing. Every day I run around for the future of life, and now the dream is a white-collar workers, do not want a child to sell candied things. The pleasant cries along with the changing times forgotten it completely. Finally, in a New Year's temple, in the midst of the crowd, I saw the strange and familiar figure. Although 15 years have passed, the appearance of old Beijing has not changed. I ran to greet him, he gestures to the little broken baby 15 years ago. He gazed in amazement at me, and then smiled kindly, as found in a dream. He handed me a bunch of candied fruit. It is too embarrassing, I have a 20-year-olds had. Old Beijing smiled and said: Ice - sugar - Gourd ... ... Hoist - Ice - sugar sweet ... ... that cries yo triumphantly into my mind, like a ray of Canmeng - deep in the alley, courtyard, door mounds children - small broken baby - Mom ... ... heat wave hit my heart, and finally I put aside everything, open throat - Ice - sugar - Gourd ... ... Hoist - Ice - Sugar ... ... crying, the symbol of old Beijing, with simple yet profound taste of old Beijing. Times change, but Beijing Cantabile cries that are drifting through the years of 2008 to that time, friends have come and listen to the world of authentic yell, taste this intoxicating Beijing rhyme it - ice - sugar - Hoist ... ... Hoist - Ice - Sugar ... ... [Comment] very rich in imagination, the article is very simple cause readers to resonate very imaginative candidates. Overall, I think this article written quite good, candidates did not show off anything, but instead, calmly telling the story of the childhood memories and his right. The core of this essay I think it cries of old Beijing, although the candidates to write to sell sugar-coated haws, but still their cries have deep feelings. Old Beijing, peddlers selling something, like crying, that many Beijing Jing Yun Jingqiang are familiar, but the sound is very difficult to hear, which represents the symbol of Beijing, is a life symbol.
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